Choose a sentence and write it again, adding some interesting words to give the reader a picture in their mind.
1. The frog jumped into the lake.
2. The girl sat on the seat outside the classroom.
3. The dog ran towards the postie.
4. The boy ran across the field.
5. The car drove down the road.
I like number 3. Here is my sentence.
ReplyDeleteThe hungry dog ran quickly towards the scared postie who just about fell off her wobbly bike.
1.A lumpy green frog jumped and splashed into the warm green lake.by Ariana.
ReplyDeleteNumber 5.The yellow shiny van went down the bumpy road.By Conrad.
ReplyDeleteThe hot frog leaped into the freezing cold lake!
ReplyDeleteThe pretty girl sat on the cold wet seat outside the warm classroom.
ReplyDeleteby Amy
The fast car with a kidnapper and 2 kids ran away from the police.By Reuben F
ReplyDelete3. The dog ran quickly towards the scared postie who almost fell off her wobbly bike.By Rose
ReplyDeleteThe dog ran quickly to the terrified postie who jumped into a lake. By Liam s, Amy and Ariana.
ReplyDeleteThe boy ran quickly across the wet weedy mushy field.by Sailem
ReplyDeletethe dog sprinted to the postie
ReplyDeletefrom sharon